Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Developed countries have been historically devoted to provide resources to poor countries in form of money to the extent of helping to solve their domestic problems. The issue is despite all this help; it has not barely showed any improvements in these places. Consequently, I strongly agree with the topic because this model is obviously failing, that is why I am going to explain the reasons and its need of change.
Giving great sums of money to a foreign country does not guarantee that the destination would be focused in taking care and improving the welfare of its citizens. That is a fact, perhaps related to bad politics, very plausible due to incapacity of managing such an immense sum of money properly; or in worse scenarios due to corruption.
Corruption is unfortunately an illness installed in many power countries, so in underdeveloped countries where a sharp inequality exists, it is more typical its appearance and as well more difficultly too get rid of it. People who have power in these places are only interested in maintaining their status more than caring for the rest of the population.
To sum up, I think countries should focus on giving a different help to these underdeveloped countries firstly by investing in infrastructures or providing there the services more needed instead of relying on the promise of the government about being him the only responsible of serving its country needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'to get'?
Suggestion: to get
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, so, well, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0686695279 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00051878339 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652360515021 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8735615614 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.222222222 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263089761184 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934892379014 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934533912555 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148966532498 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634270342349 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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