With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Some people think that using e-books instead of paper books is a good step forward, while others prefer sticking to normal books, and this comes with a set of advantages and disadvantages.
On one hand, it is known that book factories pollute the environment and that tons of forests are being cut down to produce paper. With the percent of people purchasing paper books lowering, factories will start producing less and less, which will support combating pollution and global warming. Antoher advantage of e-books is that they are also more convenient; one can have how many books he wants on one device that can be carried everywhere: waiting in line, on the airplane, at school or even work.
On the other hand, e-books can be harmful to one’s eyesight because of the blue light. This light may affect vision and could prematurely age the eyes, and research shows that too much exposure to blue light could lead to retina damage. Another drawback of digital books is that one does not get to experience reading a book at it’s finest; smelling an old book, flipping through it’s pages, seeing it’s brown pages marked by the passing of time. Reading a paper book in the digital era, when one is staring at a screen on a daily basis feels like a break from the world and it is a lot more enjoyable.
In conclusion, digital books come with advantages and also disadvantages, and the best thing to do is finding a balance between these two by buying new released books as e-books, keeping what was written is the past on paper.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75092936803 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43380034994 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9482338244 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38064392276 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153906084581 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135123538067 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263041579708 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145500916825 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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