The rwsponsibility for the protection of the environment is by transnational organization or every country?
Due to it is hurting impacts, losing environment preserving rate has been one of the serious problem around the world. It is widely believed that the international organizations have more responsibility than another system. while I do agree with the opinion. I stop suppose the local associations in every country play effectively rules for find best solution.
firstly some of the producer countries didn't reproductive system since 1800 to 2000. They were jus earn money when stablished first natural association they had learned how to control the negative effects in real worth source like air, water. for instance some environmental introduced classes started in high school that lead to flourish unique opinions to preserve some exotic Flores. as a result the government dedicate more budget to supper this category. therefore governments but not any other entity, should assume the duty to prevent their own environment from degrading.
second, another main cause that lead to I completely agree with latter view is drop poisoning outputs from factories. for example in companies like medicine, Industry, plant Venom's and even various type of spray manufacturing have to more control. this is because the government has responsibility to accept violence ban roles. furthermore we will have better opportunities to experience Health life if everyone gives more information about the harmful effects from decrease natural source.
In conclusion, each country's authorities should bear the duty of keeping their countries. However, every biology sciences and environmental researchers hope one day all persons around the world can be able to live in safe earth as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50957854406 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91273429618 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.72030651341 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0679340709 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13864278033 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392176546611 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442660757018 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829164232057 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055340093921 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.