For school children, their teacher have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that the role of teachers in the children’s intellectual and social skills is more significant than that of parents. However, nurturing and fostering a child’s moral and cognitive development is the responsibility of both teachers and parents.
On one hand, teachers are widely regarded as the backbone of educational system. Hence, they are obviously nominated for children’s intellectual and social growth due to their qualities. Specifically, one of these good qualities is that teachers are professionally trained in such an area of ideological and pedagogical skills, which strengthens students’ belief in their teachers’ knowledge and wisdom respectfully. Accordingly, this is also an advantage of teachers’ role in facilitating their guidances on students’ valuable lessons as well as social activities.
On the other hand, young children are genetically and psychologically affected by their parents due to the fact that they spend most their time and whole life staying under the same roof with their family members from the stage of toddlerhood until adulthood. A truth is that children tend to mimic their parents’s interaction, behavior, language usage and manners in their daily life. Consequently, they store these pieces of information into their brains, and then they create their own environment and personality. Moreover, during the period of preschool stage, young children can be influenced by music videos, films, clips and even social media which boost their cognitive skills. Therefore, the role of parents and family members are also crucial and unforgettable.
In conclusion, the solid foundation of a child to become a moral and talent citizen in society should be laid with the cooperation of both educators and parents.
- Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
- The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- For school children, their teacher have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, even so, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67158671587 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37030687381 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9149946226 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.083333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335454436781 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123014365331 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695199829607 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170948661173 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903868362045 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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