" school uniforms must be compulsory " . How far do you agree with this statement?
In recent years, school uniforms have gradually become a prominent symbol of school. Some people are of the opinion that they are indispensable subjects for all the students in the school ground. I am in great favor of this implementation.
On the one hand, school uniforms could remind the minors about their responsibility. Apparently, when the juveniles wear their school symbol on the outside for the world to see, they might think thoroughly about the consequences of the action before decide act on anything. While it can not be denied that there are still some delinquents who do not feel shame about the negative effect of their uncarefully behavior, there are still several evidence of the up sides of this method for students. In addition, school uniforms might help uplifting the sense of equality in school. This is clearly illustrated by the fact that even though students could come from various backgrounds, everyone would put on the same clothes as their friends in the classes. and this indicates that all the children will be treated equally and they can not look down on anyone regardless of their financial condition.
All in all, I strongly convinced that the merits of having law to ensure students will wear the uniforms on school's days outweigh the handicaps of them. In the long term, the government should take actions to make school uniforms more and and popular in the eye of the people, while have some adaptions to ensure that they could meet the conditions of the majority of the students.
- school uniforms must be compulsory How far do you agree with this statement 73
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- school uniforms must be compulsory How far do you agree with this statement 73
- school uniforms must be compulsory How far do you agree with this statement 73
- school uniforms must be compulsory How far do you agree with this statement 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun evidence seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some evidence'.
Suggestion: some evidence
...r uncarefully behavior, there are still several evidence of the up sides of this method for stud...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to uplift' or 'uplift'.
Suggestion: to uplift; uplift
...In addition, school uniforms might help uplifting the sense of equality in school. This i...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...lothes as their friends in the classes. and this indicates that all the children wi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...ke actions to make school uniforms more and and popular in the eye of the people, while...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, look, so, still, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96498054475 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63243879043 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5932893233 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184202295944 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776159833087 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377589035388 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127706084941 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302746916353 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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