Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are many controversies about whether schools are unimportant in this day and age due to the appearance of internet, where can provide for children a wide range of existing datas. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement and in this essay, I will shade the light on the reasons that support my idea.
The main drawback of the opinion that internet are more essential than schools is that it make the learners lose their orientation in studies. Even though children can access to an unlimitted range of information online but not everything on the internet is surely arranged and corrected. this issue lead to the problem that students may misunderstanding the informations as well as misleaded from various data. So that, schools are especially teachers play very important role in this case, because they can help children finding the way to understand the datas by guiding and giving examples for them.
Another demerits of this development is that studying through internet without going to school lead to the lack of interaction with teachers and their peers. The reason is that the internet can not subtitue real teachers, who give them hard supervision, discipline and punishment, or real friends, who create a competitive environment for them and can be the ones that learners can discuss with or learn from. As the result, those who study from the internet can not have this kind of motivation and inspiration to study more diligent and effective, which only schools can provide. Finally, I believe that schools besides provide theoretical knowledge, they also teach many other aspects, which helps students enhance social skills and improve their physical and mental health. For example, when go to school, children can make new friends, means that they can learn communication skill to help them create wider relationship in the future or they can learn some subjects like PE or moral values like tolerance and sharing.
In conclusion, although through internet, children can gain a lot of value informations, I believe that schools still play a very important role in their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ernet is surely arranged and corrected. this issue lead to the problem that students...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, may, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11884057971 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74129046034 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56231884058 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1693463836 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.166666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280659267676 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106581211356 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503484307976 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167802570718 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506452322303 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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