Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments
rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the highly controversial issues today regards whether scientific research should be patrolled by the public administration or entrusted to private companies instead. I partially agree with both points of view and I believe the best solution should be a compromise between the two due to several reasons that I will discuss in detail in my essay.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that governments are the institutions which should provide for the scientific progress of the country. Unfortunately, not every administration has the economic possibilities to do so, unless it cuts the funds of other important areas of the economy such as the Health Care System or Education. Ideally, the governments should control the agencies who carry out the researches and provide the greatest scientists in the country, but public money is not invested in this important field. Governors prefer to use public money to fund other institutions and projects, such as already new highway renovations or the building of new skyscrapers in the biggest cities, instead of focusing on what is really fundamental.
That is the main reason why, on the other hand, there is who believes that scientific research should be regulated by private companies. The owners' of these companies not only have enough financial resources, but they also desire to be recognized as those who funded a brilliant scientific discovery. To do so, they are willing to create, fund and patrol major researches. A good illustration of this is the different already existing foundations created by wealthy people to subsidize scientific progress, for example, those for the prevention of cancer. But these associations can't function without the government's approval, so it is essential that the two collaborate.
After having discussed the most pertinent points of this issue, I feel that the only logical conclusion is that the advantages brought by private companies in scientific research outweigh the disadvantages of having private citizens involved. Hence, I am inclined to believe that the public administration and private companies should collaborate and cooperate to compensate for one another's lacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ntion of cancer. But these associations cant function without the governments approv...
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Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
... associations cant function without the governments approval, so it is essential that the t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, really, so, for example, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35549132948 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05982564777 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543352601156 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7162095253 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.538461538 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256500231819 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872072485312 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748858194815 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149456628594 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277631906257 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.