Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies.
Do you agree or disagree?
Since twentieth century, thousands of invention have been created for advance the entire world,and there are far more knowledge has been discovered by scientists. Some people assert that those galaxy knowledge should be protected by the governments which is better than keep it by the previous companies, while many others have a conflicting opinion. Personally, I am in the favor of the former view.
The more knowledge the governments have, the more profitable life the residents own. Normally, the education which everyone is tought at school is depended by their educational department of the government. Basically, if the teacher gives more new things from the books, in the future, students may have more opportunities to feed back their native place. In addition, the educational system also provide the poverty a chance to improve their life quality, if they study hard.
On the other hands, whereas the citizens grow up, people are under the care of the country, except their family. Therefore, everyone have the responsibility to contribute their abilities. Obviously, the efficient skills and the useful knowledge are the most beneficial way to repay their country. Furthermore, once the new things which might threat the world or cause dangerous must be control by the most powerful institution the government, just for in case.
To sum up, even though the producers and the companies have the right to keep their inventions, they also need to consider how to pay back to their native place which offer protection to them. Moreover, their wisdom will advance the society as a contribution. Also, if the new things which could be a weapon, it definitely have to hold by the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Since twentieth century, thousands of in...
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...een created for advance the entire world,and there are far more knowledge has been d...
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Message: Did you mean 'this galaxy' or 'those galaxies'?
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... by scientists. Some people assert that those galaxy knowledge should be protected by the go...
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... in the favor of the former view. The more knowledge the governments have,...
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...life quality, if they study hard. On the other hands, whereas the citizens...
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...ution the government, just for in case. To sum up, even though the producers...
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Line 13, column 328, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... which could be a weapon, it definitely have to hold by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20289855072 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80447889444 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3622614065 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0613090642472 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210684549618 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420602842595 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.04078978517 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337206117956 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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