Scientific research should be carried out and controlled
by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree
or disagree?
In the modern day, scientific investigations should be managed by authorities or
private corporations, which has raised a great deal of public attention. Given that
private companies’ budgets overweigh the governments’ one in terms of carrying
out those scientific experiments, the government should undertake to conduct this
scientific research due to numerous affordable reasons.
In fact, there are two dangers of private conduct of research. Firstly, it is
attributable to the profit motive, a whole host of products are carelessly
manufactured, especially underestimating side-effects, which launch into market
containing unintended consequences. For example, thalidomide is developed by a
German enterprise causing a thousand cases of malformed births. Secondly, by
ethical reasons, it is undeniable that genetic engineering renders such social
consequences as GM crops. This technique may act as the main factor to damage
the ecosystem leading to an imbalance of the
Meanwhile, although governments have a limitation of budget spending on the
diversity of social sectors, it is reasonable to take responsibility of scientific
research by governments. Firstly, there is a fact that a number of students and
professionals in various universities inherently can conduct high-quality research
because of the long run of their knowledge. This enables to make the public of the
result of scientific investigations, which does not only help to share knowledge but
also abandon a competitive edge. Secondly, instead of focusing on making profits
by scientific products as private companies, authorities are more likely to allocate a
significant amount of money to prioritize social advantages. For instance, such
renewable energy as solar energy may deal with the issue of over-reliance on fossil
fuel, which takes a step to a fall of air contamination.
In conclusion, I personally agree with this statement, governments should take
responsibility to carry out these scientific experiments.
- Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 93
- Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
- Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language Do you think this is a positive or negative social development 78
- Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies Do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92905405405 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49222860219 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4044209704 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.25 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249005078109 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085332456482 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994564010951 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585794821735 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070768432102 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.41 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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