Recently, scientists have told us that some activities are good for our health and others are bad for us too. As human beings, it is of utmost importance to ensure that we maintain a healthy lifestyle throughout our lives. Nevertheless, millions of people still engage in these activities that are unhealthy which brings us to the reasons why they do.
First, let's take a look at addictions. Although a lot of people desire to live a healthy life, the addictions to drugs like crack, heroin and crystal meth can prove abortive to that desire. Second, addictions such as video games can keep the eyes close and glued to the TV screen whenever it's being played. Looking at the TV for a long time however can cause severe damages to the eyes which leads to the use of medicated spectacles at a very young age. Health officers have conveyed instructions regarding the use of protection to prevent getting infected with STDs during sex, but all these informations have fallen on deaf ears because most people do not like using protection during sexual intercourse. Further, in cases of gambling, people tend to continue gambling after they must have lost their life savings to the same process. Below we shall discuss the solution to these abnormalities.
To conclude, regarding the solution, there can be ways to tackle the situation to enable achievement in this area. At every instance, adverts should be made to educate the public on the benefits of living a healthy lifestyle until they must have understood it. Because of the harm drug addiction brings to the individual, it is expedient that the user is taken into rehab as soon as possible. The issue of gambling can be solved once the gambler receives orientation and gains a better perspective on investment. Lastly, let us do well to inform our kids about the danger of watching the television from a very close distance whenever we get the chance to.
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 73
- Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly services information tasks Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 56
- Throughout the history people dream to build a perfect society while they haven t agreed how the ideal society would be like What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society How do people do to achieve an ideal society 61
- People buy things which they don t need Why this is happening Is it a positive or negative development for the Individual and for society 61
- Write a letter to your friend to recommend a book to read that you have read You should include Describe the book How it can help him her Where can he get it from 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s are good for our health and others are bad for us too. As human beings, it is o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, look, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, still, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85321100917 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65003016885 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617737003058 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1056044805 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194013144822 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588799713011 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101119851782 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15389657867 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144140546935 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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