People are expressing their concern about water privation. In fact, this is one of the most severe problems drawing plenty of attention of not individuals but also authorities in many countries. This essay will elaborate several main causes and and suggest several solutions.
In the light of the fact that this matter may result from variety of factors. One of them is overpopulation. That is to say, the total population of the world is increasing every day. As a result, the demand for water is also increasing exponentially. Taking India as an example, with 1.38 billion residents, India is in the top of countries with serious water shortages, especially in dodgy area. Another cause can be the waste of water by a large part of the inhabitants. As the matter of fact, there are many people who lack awareness in using water for daily living such as forgot to turn off the faucet, took a long shower, didn't drink all the water poured, etc. Therefore, the amount of water decreased sharply, causing the water consumption of households to be negatively affected.
So as to handle this issue, a plenty of measure must be carried out. As for the government, they need to strictly control the increase of population, in which the implementation of family planning should be prioritized. In addition, the authorities should collect more water in the storage to use in emergency situation. In terms of the individuals, each local inhabitant should raise their awareness in saving water in their daily life. Moreover, parents need to pay high attention in educate their children about the vital role of water, which insists the next generation in saving water to protect human life.
In conclusion, for what have been mentioned above, it can be affirmed that a there are so many nations nowadays have to deal with the lack of water for drinking, producing and household uses. Thus, it is highly recommended that both government and residents need to perform effective solution in time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as for, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98798798799 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77755213758 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2132737064 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2777777778 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264544406045 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696523281438 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586001206813 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142474186427 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05912023519 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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