shopping is essential part of every one for different aspects. It is imperative to satisfy basic needs. In my opinion shopping us necessary for fundamental requirement rather than squander money on undesirable things. In the following eassy will discuss more about this.
To embrak, Firstly , shopping is necessary to fulfill the requirements of daily basic needs which are important for livelihood. For instance, spend on groceries, dairy products , garments..Secondly, some times for special occasions it is necessary to spend on that time which is require for others.To illustrate, Gifts offer to friends and relatives on their birthday partues and memorable events. Additionally, i
It ishelp to generate economic activity in tge form of revenue to tge authorities.Tax is included on each product whuch is render to goverment fir economic development.
However, thosewho are habitual of sopping might spend helfty amount on unwanted things. Sometimes they use credit card facilities for buying in the absence of sufficient cash. It may cause debt on them.Furthermore, many peopke imitate their friends, relative and neighbours and spend their money where theybrealky do not need to. They try to maintain their status in front of the society. So it is possible that they have to face difficulty in saving.If these people minimise their unwanted buying then it will help them to conserve extra amount for future benefits like education and medical purposes.
To conclude, shopping is crucial in regular life, however should not forge big hole in the pocket by squandering money on redundant items. Every one should curb their shopping till certain limit, so it will assist to utilise extra money for future pivotal aspects or poor section of the society in the form if charity.
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- Since science and technology is becoming more and more important school must emphasise more on teaching science and maths and less on teaching art and humanities Do you agree or disagree 75
- Some people believe that modern high technology is transforming the way we work and is benefit to all of society To what extent do you agree or disagree 52
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31914893617 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93218329394 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63475177305 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0032466734 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0833605124546 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288336889472 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031501046715 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454166213297 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340199736365 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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