Since science and technology is becoming more and more important, school must emphasise more on teaching science and maths and less on teaching art and humanities . Do you agree or disagree?
Need of science and technology is increasing day by day and indispensable in many fields. So it is believed that in the school, focus should be given to science and maths subjects rather than arts and history.However, I disagree with the above statement. I shall justify the same as follows.
To begin with,although science and maths are imperative topics to enhance the knowledge in the fields of science and research, all branches of knowledge are equally important and beneficial for future perspective. Firstly, the skill of art helps children to enhance their imagination and creativity power which is necessary in the research and development areas for designing something innovative. Secondly, art also enables to develop problem solving skills,lateral thinking,complex analysis and critical thinking skills which is definitely helps in different career fields. For instance, graphic designer needs imaginative,innovative and analytical qualities to present creative work.
Furthermore,it is also an essential to inculcate knowledge of earlier times. History is a most widely acceptable subject because it helps to understand ancestors life style, residency and culture.This information is proven to helpful for present and future point of view for further development. To elaborate, in india, Taj mahal is an eminent monument for this structure and design. Today also many people are wondering about their building plan.
However, maths and science plays a major role in the boundaries of scientific research and technology but other subjects are also contributes some share for the same.
To conclude,it is vital to teach all subjects in the school in equal manner. All are contributor to different fields which can help children to gain success in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, as for, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60516605166 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22677639326 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3574986646 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119708742499 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399700566527 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493482131297 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746918943256 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501083573726 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.