The modern rise of animal testing has been prevalent for approximately 150 years. Millions of animals were used in research to progress scientific understanding, to develop explanations to medical problems, and to create a barrier or safety net for people. While animal testing has contributed to a significant amount of life-saving medicines and treatments, it is also considered inhumane. This essay shall discuss both the viewpoints before reaching a reasonable conclusion.
On the unitary hand, those who oppose the testing of medicines on animals strongly criticise the practices followed in experiments such as forced feeding, forced inhalation, food and water deprivation, prolonged periods of physical restraint and many severe other ways. To put it in another way, they believe that finding medicines for human existence by sacrificing some animals does not justify that man is the sole custodian of the planet. Hence, on the moral ground, such experiments must be considered unethical and there must be a ban on such acts.
Yet, a host of individuals believe such testing should be supported based on the breakthroughs such experiments have produced in developing vaccinations and medications for several epidemics and deadly diseases from the earth. Being the carriers of infectious bacteria and viruses, some animals such as pigs deserve to be tested for diagnosing. Diseases such as cholera, rabies and polio are wiped out from the world as a result of relentless efforts from scientists which further strengthens the view that the world is in need of such experiments.
Analysing both the aspects of the situation, I opine that the sacrifice of a minimal proportion of animals can be prioritised by ensuring mercy to the animals while being tested as long as the tests save lives worth millions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, while, as for, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34494773519 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99000995417 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.831719938 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.454545455 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266057888375 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100912127471 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739547988709 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166878187142 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470136162377 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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