Some think that developing a successful career is more important than spending time with family and friends, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give our own opinion.
As education is considered the back born of any civilized society, near to half of a human life is spared for the sake of getting knowledge. Majority of people prefer to spend much of their time to increase their value of life by improving one’s intelligence power and knowledge than have more quality time with their nears and dears. I think one cannot perform well in his/her personal and personal life unless the person acquires deep knowledge in any subject which brings fame and legacy in life.
Firstly, if a person wants to excel in the academic one needs to sacrifice anything he/she likes. In other words, as it is told, every relation is a chain which blocks them from achieving their targets, people need to be away from the parents at least one or two decades from their life to be focused in the art of learning. Amble number of learners, such as, live away from the family members and spare in different parts of the world for fulfilling their career goals. It is proved that the people have taken risks by sacrificing whatever one likes have been written in Wikipedia and Google. Hence, a clever person every time put preference on one education knowing this only will work in the future to peak in competitions of the present era.
Secondly, a family is the place where each and every person is shaped and led to be straight in society. To put it in another way, it is the family which completes a human by having an emotional connection, by getting the supports what others fail to give, and proper guidance followed by mental support. It is believed that the life of people will be spoiled unless he/she spends a few times to spend with the blood relation. For example, in most of the families, people gather together at least once in a day on the dining table which allows them to share their feelings, let grandparents teach the offsprings the manners and value of living which they are missing inside the brick and mortar of educational organizations.
By analyzing both the aspects of the topic, neither spending much of time on education nor having more quality time with nears and dears are not the best ways, although, I feel that learners have to get cent per cent support from family members to focus on their studies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, at least, for example, i feel, i think, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69346733668 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41267266096 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545226130653 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3546716546 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.692307692 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6153846154 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124856761127 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044625929443 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472153263825 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864044308628 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033862656672 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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