Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
What is the fault of animals to be utilised?
This is a violation of animal’s rights and a such of none merciful. In spite of, there are a group of people and the majority of biomedical's doctors who are agree with the using of animal in researches. The both opinions will be analysed.
The reason that the biomedical's researches use animals that is humans and animals are sharing hundreds of illness, so animals act as models for the study of human diseases. Besides, the vast majority of animals models are mice , and that’s because the mice sharing more than 98% DNA with humans. However , there are other animals are used too such as: rabbits and dogs. Also , animals are a guinea-pig , because they are susceptible to many of the same health problems as humans such as: cancer, diabetes and heart disease,etc. In addition, animals have a shorter life cycle than humans ,also they help the doctors in understanding how a diseases processes and how it interacts with the biological system. Stanford University said that “ they take the whole responsibility for the ethical treatment of animals in medical researches very seriously .”
On the other hand, the group who refuse to use the animals as experiments they said that “ no animal model is the same of human and there are still many differences between model organisms and humans. “ Furthermore, humans and animals doesn’t always react in the same way to a drug. Also, there are some medicines which fail in humans despite passing in animal, so this is not a criterion to be measured. This point of view know that there are many animals are used in experiments and killed
and this is immoral behave. In my own perspective , there is no such need to cause pain and suffering to animals. However, they can replace animals with human volunteers. These experiments made the animals as a hornet ,but they have to refining the way the animals are cared for to help to minimise any stress or pain. “Certain harm versus potential harms” which means the harm done to human beings by not experimenting on animals is unknown, whereas the harm done to animals is certain.
To sum up, the both opinions have pros and cons , even so the advocate opinion has more drawbacks than it’s benefits. No doubt, that those try-outs bring hope to many people with conditions such as : cancer, heart disease and Alzheimer disease.
Beyond, there are a lot of methods which called none- animal methods using human cells and tissues and also, studies with human volunteers. If you ask me I think that animals doesn’t deserve to being treated in a such cruel way and they have their own rights like humans also ,so save the animals and stop testing them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, whereas, even so, i think, in addition, no doubt, such as, in spite of, to sum up, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 466.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82403433476 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53738193006 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487124463519 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3357091155 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.047619048 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1904761905 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152899032399 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548763712353 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361880755652 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861839860237 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373303482755 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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