Should children do household chores

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Should children do household chores?

When I was ten years old, I was required by my parents to do housework. I was really sad because I thought that my parents did not love me. Household chores were a pain. At the moment, I have regretted because I used to have a stupid thinking.

Tasking around the house gives children several benefits. The first one is that children can express their feelings and learn how to share work with parents. In addition, children not only gain experience but also prepare for their future life. Children can more independent when they live out of parents. Another advantage for doing housework is create...

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Children can more independent
Children can be more independent

Another advantage for doing housework is create a happy atmosphere
Another advantage for doing housework is to create a happy atmosphere

While children is washing up
While children are washing up

social evils is stopped.
social evils are stopped.

Sentence: While children is washing up, each members of family encourage them which make children happier about their helping.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and members
Description: The fragment family encourage them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace encourage with verb, past tense

Sentence: Another reasons is that children may break something.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to Another and reasons

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2

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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 300 350
No. of Characters: 1417 1500
No. of Different Words: 172 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.162 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.723 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.366 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 104 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.636 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.139 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.474 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5