In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should children or teenagers be punished?
Recently, there has been a surge in the number of teenagers engaging in criminal activities. This trend stems from many causes, and I believe that there are numerous effective strategies that can be implemented to prevent and mitigate this issue.
With the rapid expansion of the global economy, parents are increasingly engaged in their jobs and devote less time to their children. As a result, young people who lack the necessary education and parental guidance are more likely to commit crimes and engage in criminal activity. In addition, the prevalence of modern technology has enabled young people to access the Internet and expose themselves to inappropriate content online from which they can view violence or criminal offenses. Through the consumption of such content, young people may develop a distorted perception of reality and moral standards, which may eventually lead them to take part in illegal activities.
There are a variety of approaches that could be used to penalize juvenile offenders. Teenagers should receive community services as a way to instill social values and rehabilitate themselves back into society. Furthermore, those who engage in violent felonies, such as assault or murder, should be subjected to stricter penalties of longer imprisonment in order to reduce their chances of backsliding after release.
To sum up, there are numerous factors that contribute to juvenile delinquency, including a lack of parental supervision and the influence of the Internet. This phenomenon has a detrimental effect on society and on individuals and therefore needs to be addressed in order to prevent further harm to future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, may, so, still, therefore, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43243243243 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9514994437 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5724605223 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176661110348 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558953932883 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366995941174 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933675879338 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395838180078 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.