SHOULD GOVERNMENT MAKE DECISIONS ABOUT PEOPLE'S LIFESTYLE OR SHOULD PEOPLE MAKE THEIR OWN DECISIONS?
oday, in this new era, most people are educated and making progress in their lives, and they are capable enough to look after themselves. However, there are still individuals who do not have access to even basic requirements such as a house, food, and education. So the Government should make decisions to give equality to everyone.
On the one side, one mass of the population can fulfill all their needs and can live the right lifestyle. The pivotal reason for this, they have access to a sound education system where children at a very young age become capable of earning good wages so that they can afford a standard living. Secondly, everyone has the right to live the way they desire, especially if people can afford it. For example, if anyone wants to live in a luxurious apartment if he/she can afford it, he has all the freedom to live there, irrespective of their education, professional, and religion. Officials should not intervene if they are accomplishing all the legal terms.
On the other hand, some individuals even cannot afford healthy food, and many of them sometimes have to stay empty stomach. So for these people, the officials should make hostels where they can eat live and study as well for free to make themselves capable of living a life where at least they can manage to meet their basic requirements. Secondly, many people born with some deformities and some become challenged due to misfortunes, so the Government should make provisions for these people to grow in life, and it is their fundamental right to equality.
To sum up, indeed, every individual should have the freedom to live the way they want. However, the Government should make laws for those people who can not achieve necessities. The officials should make such a system where everyone is equal, and there is no biased system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, at least, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86538461538 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60956294942 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516025641026 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3825652949 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272826963053 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113659448865 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11187997259 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206786431855 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880882686695 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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