Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this.
Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain: Why you are writing to them?
Why you think the insurance should not be increased?
What you want them to do?
Write at least 150 words
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in connection with the amount I should pay for my insurance car monthly. Informed by your side the guarantee for my car changed and should to purchase another money for it. Due to there is no explanation for this statement, therefore I want to express my dissatisfaction for this updated.
In the very outset, I booked for the golden category, as you know it is the highest, to make sure I received a good service when I face a problem. When I signed for our yearly contract between me and your company, there is no item talked about changed in monthly money, due to this I built my money budget. From my side, it is impossible to pay any another cent for this.
Due to the contract, I asked you to provide a clear analysis for this update to convince me to increase my insurance, so I will pay the same amount of money until received it. Ultimately, I hope you to share with me the contact for who is in charge of to follow up this issue.
I am looking forward for your prompt response.
Yours faithfully, Awad Elshikh
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43076923077 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62030708209 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2044245622 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279045789199 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114073739115 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363315873492 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15545948372 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028008176091 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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