Should we allow GM Food? Give reasons to support your opinion.
In the information age, people always enhance their knowledge so there are numerous invents which are invented every year. Among those, we have an invents which can get well-paid job to farmers, this invent is called 'GM Food' by researchers. Therefore, any farmers who want to improve their wage can apply for the better life. In my opinion, I reckon that to get more money, farmers should apply those steps in this invent.
On the one hand, a body growing body of research suggests that farmers is one of five current jobs which get the least wage from their major. Genetic modification (GM) of food is invented as a beneficial solution to alleviate this problem for farmers. In addition, growing normal crops brings farmers a plethora of risks because there are a lot of disasters can come and alter their life to turn back the first start.
Taking Vietnam as an example, there are many ubiquitous invents in there, which were invented to boost farmers' life. It can obviously damage citizens' health but it will be cheaper than the way which farmers have to do by themselves. When individuals choose between two options high or low costs, they have to know that the quality of this product they receive is the same as the cost they paid before.Therefore, it is not damaging to farmers about this problem because choices are depended on customers and the missions of the farmers are to try their best to supply the best quality products for their customers.
On the other hand, it is straightforward to completely understand about the worries of the customers about the quality of products. Customers can totally require to get those higher quality products but obviously they have to pay more money for such higher products. About the others, if they choose the products with low-cost and worse quality, they will accept the coming consequences which the products they bought in the paste can cause. We completely understand that they have to save money to pay other expenses in their life.
Overall, although DM food have many adverse impacts on individuals who use products applied this invent in the past. In my opinion, I completely agree that farmers should enable to apply this invent into their crops but they still keep the old way which crops are grew by themselves. It is the best way to balance between farmers' life quality and customers' demands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, therefore, well, i reckon, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84158415842 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50996445718 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480198019802 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3448576636 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.058823529 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0648973298767 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280661586934 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415175430924 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0446357065058 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348266167662 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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