Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

Even though world countries are developing fast day by day, others are getting poorer in the end of it. Of course main reason that some nations are poor is related to their government leaders. The most of population of poorer nation live barely because their leaders of government don't work completely, look after their nations. it is dangerous to become uneducated nations by living poorly. The reason that people who don't have food and are empty stomach everyday can't think about education. But then nations with uneducated populations collapse.
so how should we decide it? In modern society wealthy nations help poorer nations by granting and lending. Also we can receive information that some people unite to help other poor or organise any events on TV, radio and social network. On the other hand some overendowed people who never know <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="know "></span>without food life and homeless waste wealth such as money, food and materials. However they never think to save money to help other poor. I think we live in only one world. The world is our home. so all people who live in the world are one family. In our life we always support our family members. Why don't we help other poor family members of world that is called our home?

In summary, there are two ways to support poor nations. I mean that I support these two cases. At the first, it must be responsibility of the governments to take care of their populations themselves. any government leaders are voted by their populations supporting to improve their country's economy, law, politics and nation's life. For instance, the government pursues a best policy such as antirecession and austerity. there mustn't be unemployment and uneducated people to fight poverty. The second way is that wealthy countries should encourage poor countries. they can share their experiences to develop nations, give low-interest loan, some donations and support their education with low price. All of us know the song " we are the world" by Michael Jackson. so please help other members of our world family.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ely because their leaders of government dont work completely, look after their natio...
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Suggestion: It
...k completely, look after their nations. it is dangerous to become uneducated natio...
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Line 1, column 420, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ving poorly. The reason that people who dont have food and are empty stomach everyda...
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Line 1, column 466, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ave food and are empty stomach everyday cant think about education. But then nations...
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Suggestion: So
... with uneducated populations collapse. so how should we decide it? In modern soci...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...poorer nations by granting and lending. Also we can receive information that some pe...
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Suggestion: However,
...alth such as money, food and materials. However they never think to save money to help ...
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Suggestion: So
... only one world. The world is our home. so all people who live in the world are on...
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Suggestion: don't
... always support our family members. Why dont we help other poor family members of wo...
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Suggestion: Any
...e care of their populations themselves. any government leaders are voted by their p...
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Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
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...cy such as antirecession and austerity. there mustnt be unemployment and uneducated p...
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...tries should encourage poor countries. they can share their experiences to develop ...
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...are the world' by Michael Jackson. so please help other members of our world ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, then, for instance, i mean, i think, in summary, of course, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12716763006 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20235387381 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546242774566 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1304750317 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2307692308 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3076923077 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19230769231 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275240683093 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711740805185 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092411443868 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203473330555 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869104673183 0.056905535591 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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