Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibilities of governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
As the gap between the rich and poor gets wider, the economic status between countries also grew larger. Therefore, the responsibilities for patronage of developing nations become an issue. Some people claim that the developed nations are the primary responsibility to take care of developing nations while others believe that this is the developing nation’s government’s responsibility to look after own citizens’ wealth.
The responsibility for helping developing nation becomes the world’s concern as the gap between those two nations is wide. Therefore, it is reasonable for wealthy nations to be responsible for helping the poorer nations. The reason for this is, developed countries are already wealthy and they have enough wealth to help poorer nations in an effective way. Instead of just providing the financial patronage, developed nations would provide the most necessity items such as medical and educational help. In addition to this, developed nations have enough knowledge to provide a lesson to developing nation as guidance. Thus, the developed countries can be responsible for developing country’s growth.
The developing nation’s governmental responsibility cannot be relied upon because usually those governments in those nations are suffered from corruptions and their main concern is involving with their own wealth rather than the country’s wealth. If the government seriously took a role of responsibility, they would not let the country to be poorer. Furthermore, the developing country does not have capacity to develop them so it is necessary of developed nation’s help. Therefore, the responsibility should be upon the developed country’s hand.
In conclusion, as the income gap gets wider, the country’s economic status gets wider. Even though some people claim that the government of developing nation should be responsible for own country’s economic development, I believe that it is developed nation’s responsibility. Since developed countries have enough wealth and knowledge to patronage developing nations in most effective ways, they should be the one responsible for developing nations’ growth.
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. 73
- The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they receive from employers. 67
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world 61
- The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. 56
- Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
...ealth. The responsibility for helping developing nation becomes the world's concern...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ve enough wealth to help poorer nations in an effective way. Instead of just providing the financia...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...from corruptions and their main concern is involving with their own wealth rather than the c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2375 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.16 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12 0.0946595960268 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0425 0.0501214627716 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.025 0.0437548338989 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1075 0.122226691241 88% => OK
Participles: 0.045 0.0403226058552 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.43056150979 2.80594681477 122% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025 0.0326793684256 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.095 0.0861772015684 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0175 0.021408717616 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2200.0 1933.35771543 114% => OK
No of words: 319.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.89655172414 6.12580529183 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.479623824451 0.374742101984 128% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.382445141066 0.28420135186 135% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.260188087774 0.203846283523 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.238244514107 0.137316102897 174% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43056150979 2.80594681477 122% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.037074148 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.56093040696 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.9760395116 60.7387585426 74% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9375 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7861966534 49.517814964 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 127.492653851 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.814263465372 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 58.1820141066 49.1944974215 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.71428571429 1.69124875643 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351283123863 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149915926158 0.102741220458 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0731183164471 0.0668466124924 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.570481747032 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.093344386585 0.148594505496 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159489406142 0.134430193775 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737541283893 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.498186876139 0.324371583561 154% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0339823182151 0.0638462369009 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26118256771 0.228012699653 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565705674229 0.058150111329 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.