Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth with poorer nations by providing them with things such as food and education? Or is this the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens?
Nowadays, many nations are progressing at a such speedy rate that they have technological solutions in all sector for fast production, so it is often <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-08A324AA4DD7758502AB0BD18F8A7B07" data-pwa-rule-id="PROG" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Incorrect verb after 'is'" data-pwa-suggestions="argued" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="argue" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">argue</pwa> that these countries should <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-27D3BDE400F4475F1E8456CCA46280D6" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3071" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: help" data-pwa-suggestions="help" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="provide aid to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">provide</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-27D3BDE400F4475F1E8456CCA46280D6" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3071" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: help" data-pwa-suggestions="help" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="provide aid to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> aid to</pwa> poor nations with needs like food and education, however some says it is the responsibility of poor nations to manage their limited resources for their citizen.
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0FF950A497EDE4AF39D2B25BEEE48BCE" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_126" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: Developed" data-pwa-suggestions="Developed" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="To start with, developed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done pwa-span-hovered">To start with, developed</pwa> countries have the ample solutions to manage their resources, as they <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-4F43B155126FE2D7ED2096465FCBEC49" data-pwa-rule-id="EXTRA_SPACE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Remove extra space" data-pwa-suggestions="have solutions" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="have solutions" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">have solutions</pwa> for the fast food production, water recycle or progression in education sector, because of being rich, so it is their sense of responsibility for the society to think about the wellbeing of developing nations as they are lacking behind. For instance, The U.S. and japan <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-A9C62C1AFB864676385AD0D6BA281902" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="are already moved" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">are already moved</pwa> ahead in food production, where they used science to produce the crop at double the rate to meet the demand of their country and to export, therefore, having this much resource can help poor countries, furthermore less developed countries also have the poor infrastructure for the education, <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-5753C69A4B157D3C21A1C7E888275C85" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_727" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: regarding" data-pwa-suggestions="regarding" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="in regard to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">in regard to</pwa> this, wealthy nations can support them with the international students program.
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-6EA3D7C315838730DE2D34DE2F50F81A" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_377" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: It" data-pwa-suggestions="It" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="On the other hand, it" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">On the other hand, it</pwa> is always the question asked, does taking help from other countries is all that the solutions of fulfilling the need of <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7BAE7431FC5103116E2EE7A362AF93FB" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a citizen~the citizen" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="citizen" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">citizen</pwa>? This is something which <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E1D464AA95D45945D50C3311C3135F8D" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_465" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="certainly " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">certainly </pwa>cannot <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-BB70DCBE0246D078809FEF4EE2D16565" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be agreed" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">be agreed</pwa> with, as it is the responsibility of the country to understand how to manage their minimal resources, if we take the example of Pakistan who already had received the help from The U.S. in millions of <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B7C57704A1BC6FD46F4D2D61D90B4A51" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a dollar~the dollar" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="dollar" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">dollar</pwa> for the development, despite, of this they <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7E19F49C6FA2E29323AD6ABF3902A642" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3077" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: cannot" data-pwa-suggestions="cannot" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="are not able to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">are not able to</pwa> fulfill the basic demand of food and education of the large majority of citizens, as they are spending the most of the investment in Defence sector, so depending alone on other countries is not the solutions but to come with the proper management plan can help them.
To conclude, Although it is the duty of the nation to provide basic need of the citizen, however, I firmly believe that developed nation should help the poor nations as they in developing phase and struggling with <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-CBEDE4E8D26656E0CA7632D2E187E35A" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a basic~the basic" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="basic" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">basic</pwa> need for the humans like food and water, which cash rich countries already moved ahead with
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- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth with poorer nations by providing them with things such as food and education Or is this the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens 56
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- The graph below shows the popularity of different fast foods in Britain and the trends in their consumption. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, for instance, in regard to, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 7045.0 1615.20841683 436% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 601.0 315.596192385 190% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 11.7221297837 5.12529762239 229% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.95129289623 4.20363070211 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.5366669883 2.80592935109 482% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 284.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472545757072 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1922.4 506.74238477 379% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.2 1.60771543086 199% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 405.297652966 49.4020404114 820% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 880.625 106.682146367 825% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.125 20.7667163134 362% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.75 7.06120827912 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0309970549685 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267007033397 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0204979045541 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.038138030591 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019165901498 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 71.3 13.0946893788 544% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -140.01 50.2224549098 -279% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 28.7 7.44779559118 385% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 51.4 11.3001002004 455% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 51.88 12.4159519038 418% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.95 8.58950901804 139% => OK
difficult_words: 175.0 78.4519038076 223% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 81.0 9.78957915832 827% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 52.0 10.7795591182 482% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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