Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?
Many people opine that living in rural areas give a healthy environment for the children to grow up, however, many people believe that living in urban areas give <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-68EB1AABBDED802D9F1817EC1A16FA6E" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3062" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: many" data-pwa-suggestions="many" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="numerous" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">numerous</pwa> opportunity in terms of career advancement. The following paragraph takes the look at <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E7539C481A913B224A54BA481914BDF0" data-pwa-rule-id="MISSING_DETERMINER_CE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="the pros" data-pwa-heavy="true" data-pwa-dictionary-word="pros" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">pros</pwa> and cons of living <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-493721FF2B703272ECEBC844EF2C17A4" data-pwa-rule-id="MISSING_WORD_CE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing word" data-pwa-suggestions="in the" data-pwa-heavy="true" data-pwa-dictionary-word="in" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">in</pwa> city and the <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-1346C06F8CD7C28B563B9FB73FAA1053" data-pwa-rule-id="COMBINE_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="countryside" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="country side" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">country side</pwa>.
To begin with, living in rural area has health benefits, as children living in healthy environment because of <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-5D5E5529989EC4A3A5808D746696881B" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="it covers the large portion~they cover the large portion~we cover the large portion~I cover the large portion" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the large portion is covered" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">the large </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-5D5E5529989EC4A3A5808D746696881B" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="it covers the large portion~they cover the large portion~we cover the large portion~I cover the large portion" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the large portion is covered" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">portion</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-5D5E5529989EC4A3A5808D746696881B" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="it covers the large portion~they cover the large portion~we cover the large portion~I cover the large portion" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the large portion is covered" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-5D5E5529989EC4A3A5808D746696881B" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="it covers the large portion~they cover the large portion~we cover the large portion~I cover the large portion" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the large portion is covered" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is covered</pwa> in greenery, so they get fresh air to breathe, which is the foremost requirement while raising children. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-C2CA63203D270E8D266D832C1FA25300" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_377" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: Countryside" data-pwa-suggestions="Countryside" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="On the other hand, countryside" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">On the other hand, countryside</pwa> youngster face the issue like lack of confidence as they do not have the good interpersonal skills compared to city children, for instance, in big cities they meet people from diverse culture, and they feel shy to talk to them, eventually it lower down their confidence which hampers their career progress<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-CF93F048B5C3AAFF98367A1F324136C2" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_609" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word=" as well" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> as well</pwa>.
However, children living in city have the <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3E3A571BE2B65ADA2E97C5CE7EAC9D6A" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: privilage" data-pwa-suggestions="privilege" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="privilage" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">privilage</pwa> to get the all the modern facilities for studies, in particular they get all the latest editions of the books and the digital enabled classroom <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-486A9962A8C22516AC22E13717FFF401" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: whoes" data-pwa-suggestions="whose" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="whoes" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">whoes</pwa> pedagogy approach makes study easier for them. Regardless, of the benefits there are some issue which children face in city, such as, obesity as they prefer mobile games over going out in park for taking part in physical activities.
In conclusion, Although country side has benefits like pollution free environment for the children, however, I believe there are <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-23E57B3C9AA24F827D2E3E9E466BBDF6" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_212" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="clearly " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">clearly </pwa>plethora of benefits of growing children in city, as it provide them more career opportunity by the use of technology in the education sector.
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| 2019-11-05 | VINAY KHANDURI | 11 | view |
- The graph below shows the popularity of different fast foods in Britain and the trends in their consumption. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 11
- Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered? 11
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth with poorer nations by providing them with things such as food and education Or is this the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens 56
- The graph below shows the popularity of different fast foods in Britain and the trends in their consumption. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 11
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth with poorer nations by providing them with things such as food and education? Or is this the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1423, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead.' da...
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Line 5, column 1969, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead.' da...
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Line 5, column 3104, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lowers', 'lows'?
Suggestion: lowers; lows
...feel shy to talk to them, eventually it lower down their confidence which hampers the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.3376753507 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 6644.0 1615.20841683 411% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 557.0 315.596192385 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 11.9281867145 5.12529762239 233% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.6797377037 2.80592935109 488% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447037701975 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1805.4 506.74238477 356% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.2 1.60771543086 199% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 308.662242857 49.4020404114 625% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 604.0 106.682146367 566% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.6363636364 20.7667163134 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0154267050315 0.244688304435 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212813279062 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306137279324 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0195521675946 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010122984652 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 60.1 13.0946893788 459% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -114.63 50.2224549098 -228% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 23.7 7.44779559118 318% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.7 11.3001002004 369% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 52.8 12.4159519038 425% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 78.4519038076 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 45.0 9.78957915832 460% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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