Social and modern trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to make the living more colorful, especially online. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should live in what we are having and feel comfortable.
To what extent do you agree with these statement?
It is assumed that the currently happening and up-to-date tendencies are indispensable in human civilization. From the fact to the belief, they are able to partly make the society more lively and diverse, particularly the appearance of Internet. Thoroughly, some people opposed that those trends are insignificant and each person ought to be themselves and enjoy the surroundings with pleasure. As for that, I partially agree with this first side of given notion; and this essay will demonstrate my viewing somehow.
Being at the other side of thoughts, the trendy might bring along the definite drawbacks to be concerned. At first, getting following the existing happenings will be non-personalism to the people. As the matter of fact, when a person that who sticks himself into a trend, he may get losing into his own values. Even that, the strongly dangerous immitating actions from the youngsters can lower the social standards and create more than a think unforeseen consequences to the development themselves. Moreover, they could somehow forget the environment belonging to their livings for which they must put a care. Those could be taken as examples for family’s traditions, homeland’s customs for even the self-personalities.
In reverse and getting my own supports, modern trends can attract many viewers with certain interests and help them improve their lacking towards the reality. It can be positive depending on the on-going situations. For instance, when a former fashion trend is restored, it could be mentioned from many aspects including social medias, telecommunication or people's surroundings. These seniors can be proud and discuss with their descendants about the suitability for their clothing styles. In fact, people can enhance their understandings by watching entertainment forms such as styles from films or fashion shows. Therefore, trends are sometimes satisfying to many people and they can experience through plenty of perspectives in different periods. Due to the truth for the good point, I strongly agree that getting alongside and updated with the trends could obviously vary the color for people those who desire to improve their current livings.
In conclusion, each individual can feel comfortable by being truthful or be able to pursue state-of-art trends. It is clear that swings can be fast and hard to follow but their presence is unquestionable. It can upgrade people's living and vary their surroundings as well as perspectives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41237113402 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08536050783 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582474226804 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.644613239 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11941822668 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394311103917 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343534962311 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763078347858 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00986246086179 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.