Social and modern trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to make the living more colorful, especially online. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should live in what we are having and feel comfortable. To what extent do you agree with these statements?
With the innovation of the technology, social media is considered as one of the most effective tools to create new and unique trends, particularly young generation. It is claimed that those tendencies are generated with the purpose of entertaining the online community. While some people donot prefer to follow them and enjoy the conditions which they have as well as feel satisfied. In my perspective, I agree with the second notion and this essay will discuss about my opinion somehow.
On the one hand, almost modern trends are derived from the famous individuals to create the up to date phenomenon for the social community. For instance, in current, Tiktok is one of the most popular applications that the celebrities use much more to upload videos in which they dance or sing. Afterthat, they build a new waves for their fans who almost are the younger to catch on. Therefore, social media is one of the most potential worlds existing the trendings which are satisfying for many a person and they can enjoy absolutely in their surrounding.
On the flip side, many people realize that the modern trends arenot necessary and meaning for the practical living. In view of the fact that following those trendings is one impact which make people spend much time on investing to set up videos or searching webs. It is really a dramatic watse, while plenty of works need to be completed. Moreover, people should enhance the knowledge via the efficient books or films, not only surfing the internet. Thus, it is not essential to pursue the new trends and instead of that forcusing on the real factor which the living feel more comfortable.
To breif, following the lastest trendings is an attractive experience, however, they only exist for a while and then disappear. Thus, individuals in particularly young generator should pay attention on more the real factor which are important and value in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96551724138 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67936152731 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9737320781 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.6 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173427146454 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055798957783 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395230220035 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104903138053 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238106048084 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.