Social Media Effects
Some people think that social media (such as Facebook) have shown a deteriorating influence on both individuals and society. I agree as it results in addiction to a person and leads to cancelled culture to some groups.
Severe addiction is one of the impacts one found in using too much social media. This is because human brains are being manipulated by the instant rewards one gets from using it which comes from the features embedded in social media, making one craves for more as it generates dopamine (the hormone of achievement). According to an NCBI study in 2020 recorded that 70% of young adults in New York spent mostly 8 hours on Instagram per day. Regarding this, an increase of dopamine level found inside their brain and only can be stimulated in a high amount when they were using social media.
Equally important, a cancel culture to a certain group is also found to be the same obnoxious effect of social media as not all people are literate to distinguish hoaxes. This is because they believe everything they see and hear on social media, moreover of what comes from their influencer. A survey done by CNN in 2019 found that 50% of Muslim discrimination in New York increased drastically after President Donald Trump's tweet, which assumed a correlation between Muslims and the 911 tragedy. The discrimination case was investigated and found most of the perpetrators called Muslims a "911 terrorist" just because Donald Trump tweeted so.
To sump up, I believe addiction and a cancel culture are two deteriorating effects of using social networking sites. It is important for users to be wise while using it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, regarding, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96014492754 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78086024099 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8264358041 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314422378202 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113419348477 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102830251207 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174751485627 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259728443239 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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