SOCIAL PROBLEMS IN TEENAGER

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SOCIAL PROBLEMS IN TEENAGER

Adolescents have been known as a growing source of social problems recently. Several people ‎maintain that the reason for this important issue is that our modern lifestyle is taking valuable ‎supervising time from parents. I completely agree with this notion.‎

The primary reason for the recent social problems involving teenagers is that they have more ‎access to unsuitable TV programs, when parents are absent. In the recent years, there has been ‎a growing interest among moviemakers towards action movies. As a result of potential success ‎of this genre, the number of movies which has been produced has increased dramatically. ‎Unsupervised teenagers, who have a tendency towards these movies, have instant access to ‎them through different TV channels. These movies, in addition, may encourage unconventional ‎behaviors, such as drug abuse or violence. Therefore, teenagers who watch these films may be ‎encouraged to show aggressive behavior in the society, or develop a sense of curiosity towards ‎drugs.‎

Psychological diseases are another reason of social problems among adolescents. Teenagers ‎are prone to different mental disorders, depression for instance, when they are left alone. ‎Researches have confirmed that one of the reasons of developing depression may be lack of ‎appropriate communication. If teenagers feel alone at home, they will turn to social media for ‎their needed interactions. These types of communication cannot develop a sense of satisfaction, ‎and may endanger adolescents to deprivation of social interaction. Therefore, they are more ‎likely to suffer from depression in the long run.‎

In conclusion, parents tight schedule not only has led to easier access to violent TV programs ‎for teenagers, but it has also made them vulnerable to unproductive interactions in social ‎media, which can result to depression in the long run.‎

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76842105263 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20938528281 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60350877193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9447939687 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262815073184 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922206007252 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10532213205 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149532489361 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718415322145 0.056905535591 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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