Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
There has been a colossal upsurge in the discussion about if an individual should have their own freedom in any circumstances due to the lack of functions in regulations and policies. Although the deprivation of rules can affect a range of facets in our societal life, I personally give a green light to the former statements. In this essay, I'll cite some appropriate points about this issue and give a piece of evidence to shed light on my rational conclusion.
First and foremost, without the advent of discipline, people don't have the standard to abide by, which causes a reluctant attitude toward the managerial function of government and the authority system. It can lead to a dramatic increase in criminal and social stigma. Secondly, the resident may not think about a repercussion of their misbehavior. No one in a community has the power to drive an individual to do the right thing unless the existence of legislation. Thirdly, obliging to rules and laws is symbolize the government's talent in managing the nations. Perhaps the best example of this would be Singapore, thanks to many policies which put a strict fine for people littering outside, this country reach the top among the cleanest and freshest nations across the globe.
To be clear, the world can not run systematically and methodically once lack of legislation. The adults no longer seem like role models for children to imitate. If every misbehavior and negative activity can not be controlled, it can bring an adverse influence on society. Moreover, the security of one nation will disappear and be worthless if discipline is not performed. People may live in fear with its freedom lifestyle and there may be more and more rebellious generations in the next age. Finally, laws do not only play a pivotal role in correcting people but also help the world from alarming problems such as overpopulation. For instance, thanks to the one-child policy in China, this country can control the population in the domestic area which helps it avoid problems such as starvation, unemployment, etc.
In conclusion, I wholeheartedly agree with the above statement and it all stated that policy and legislation contribute an essential effect to our daily life. Although some rules and laws still have their own disadvantage and drawbacks for each habitant, we can not deny their vital function in constructing the powerful and prestigious nations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09068010076 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95923143334 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581863979849 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2756986571 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.277777778 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110135803214 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311999971804 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401713694993 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680988977825 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300985828201 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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