Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
There has been a colossal upsurge in a discussion about death penalty should be enacted to solve the heinous crime. Although it may seem that this rule is inhumane, it has both pros and cons. In this essay, I will cite some appropriate points about this issue and give my opinion that whether capital punishment tends to negative or positive influence on society.
On the one hand, the death penalty may seem inhuman and immoral under any circumstance. Firstly, killing a criminal is not relieve the sense of loss from the victim's family. Everything has happened and it is true that we can't turn back time to deter the notorious performance of delinquents. Secondly, capital punishment may cost a government and authority an arm and a leg in order to purchase to potion for the criminal. Thirdly, every individual may have immature thoughts and do not know about the repercussions that they cause. This can lead them to commit the crime by chance and the death penalty seem too much for them. For instance, some trivial delinquency should be solved by the ideological re-educate and giving their prisoner a second chance to turn over the new leaf. In the modernized age, our nations aim to construct life with happiness and forgiveness instead of punishing them by blood debt.
On the other hand, the government should consider some extremely hazardous crimes in order to come to the conclusion on whether sentence to death the delinquent or not. To be clear, in some abominable crimes, just only capital punishment can reduce the societal concern and mitigate the dangerous criminal. Although it may seem immoral, it can give the person who has similar thoughts about the delinquent a lesson to not commit the heinous activity. Perhaps the best example of this would be the kidnapping incidents that occurred in the US, the criminal relapsed into crime many times and put a dramatic threat to the society. These delinquents are worth being given capital punishment for whatever they do.
In conclusion, it all stated that capital punishment should be imposed for the most serious crimes and the government can't take it back as much as possible. In my opinion, no one deserves the death penalty except for the person don't have remorse and continuously repeats their noxious offense to the communication.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relieved'.
Suggestion: relieved
...nce. Firstly, killing a criminal is not relieve the sense of loss from the victims fami...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'victims'' or 'victim's'?
Suggestion: victims'; victim's
... not relieve the sense of loss from the victims family. Everything has happened and it ...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ing has happened and it is true that we cant turn back time to deter the notorious p...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... most serious crimes and the government cant take it back as much as possible. In my...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the death penalty except for the person dont have remorse and continuously repeats t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, except for, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97674418605 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67820201996 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547803617571 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3921286735 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292609477871 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864717901279 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937998221264 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194485770719 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542953725689 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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