Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were
free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been noted that the rule of law is the foundation of modern civilisation.
While some believe that a society without laws can function properly thanks to
human characteristics, I contend that it will completely collapse due to bad
behaviour.
On the one hand, certain shared beliefs have made countries with no official rules
possible throughout the history of mankind. In fact, centuries before the first laws
were introduced, the ancient Chinese had been able to gather in millions as a
nation to save them from natural disasters and enemies since they all shared an
intuitive sense of community. Furthermore, in modern Bhutan, national or
organisational rules are essentially redundant as most citizens already live in
harmony with each other as the result of Buddhist practices which promote
compassion across races or social classes.
Nevertheless, I am of the opinion that if people are free to do whatever they desire,
social order would be destroyed by misbehaviour. In Vietnam, for example, at a
crowded intersection without clear regulations and instructions, many commuters
would happily block others for a quick pass. Worse still, if there is an accident,
some ill-tempered drivers are quick to throw punches at each other right in the
middle of the road, which instantly brings the traffic to a complete standstill. As
similar consequences can be predicted in other fields such as commerce and
politics, the normal operation at a societal level is likely to collapse entirely.
In conclusion, civilisations without agreed rules could exist if citizens possessed
specific qualities. However, I believe societies will stop operating because of poorly-
behaved individuals. From my perspective, governments should continue to enact
strict laws that promote discipline and order for their countries to thrive in the
modern era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Specific
...es could exist if citizens possessed specific qualities. However, I believe societies...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Strict
...governments should continue to enact strict laws that promote discipline and order ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52413793103 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01234084792 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665517241379 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2871405361 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15112067858 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502781736282 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525286349849 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0341995156647 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577017135077 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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