The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you
think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Social media has deeply infiltrated everyone’s life and is
believed to be replacing our face-to-face interaction. This
situation, although advantageous in certain aspects, is generally
a detriment to true human communication in the long run.
On the one hand, there are a number of benefits from using
social networks to communicate. Firstly, they facilitate
communication in modern times as people can now globally
connect with old friends and relatives, or with others who
share common interests. For example, Facebook is currently
providing service for 2.4 billion users who can choose to
connect and interact with anyone they want, regardless of
where they are. Secondly, study sessions frequently occur on
social networking websites through live streaming services.
Therefore, learners around the world now have free access to
online classes on such sites.
On the other hand, the disadvantages of social media replacing
face-to-face interaction are much more concerning. As these
sites are becoming more and more dominant and attract
large numbers of new users every day, people can fall prey
to online communication abuse, such as online bullying
and harassment. Social networking websites can become
a toxic environment where users can be verbally abused
because there are only a few rules, most of which are spoken
rules rather than established guidelines, that restrict hateful or
abusive contents. Furthermore, overuse of social media to
communicate can lead to people downplaying the importance
of face-to-face interaction on which true human relationships
thrive. Nowadays, many young and reclusive users prefer
living in a virtual world on social sites rather than engaging in
real-life relationships. This may have serious mental effects,
such as increased stress, anxiety, and loneliness.
In conclusion, the downsides of social media replacing face-
to-face interaction are more significant than the benefits users
could reap from those sites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85135135135 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98963390465 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3020360553 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 34.0 4.38176352705 776% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28285214889 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105362551982 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123827882086 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635457088205 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883520399031 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.65 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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