Laws can be taken to refer to the rules imposed on citizens. In my opinion, a society without laws cannot maintain order although tough laws can be counterproductive in some cases.
A lawless society cannot function well because its economy would be chaotic. Laws stipulate what people should do in public places to make sure personal behaviour does not disrupt the operation of public systems and facilities. For example, motorists and pedestrians should obey traffic regulations to avoid traffic accidents and jams caused by reckless driving. This ensures that commuters can show up for work on time and companies can deliver goods to customers in a timely manner. Businesses can then operate smoothly and generate revenue, which is essential to a healthy economy. Economic prosperity provides sufficient cash for the government to finance public services, such as law enforcement, fire fighting and water and electricity supplies, without which a society could collapse.
Laws can also uphold some values which are critical to a harmonious society. Driven by self-interest, people sometimes tend to do things that can harm others through fraudulent or violent activity. Laws punish thest behaviours and encourage people to bear in mind virtues such as honesty, loyalty and integrity in social lives, professional lives and business settings. Some business laws, for example. impose harsh penalties on some business practices, such as making exaggerated claims on products or selling counterfeit goods so as to build trust between sellers and consumers. If people trust each other, they can live in harmony and society will not be crippled by mis understandings and tensions.
On the other hand, laws are sometimes prone to limit freedom and can at least appear to inhibit social progress. Strict laws can suppress creativity and discourage people from expressing creativity and discourage people from expressing their views and developing innovations that can improve the well-being of the public. One example is the censorship law that restricts the freedom of speech. If the press and citizens had no opportunity to voice their concerns, a country could not pinpoint and tackle some problems such as corruption and bureaucracy.
In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running without laws, although imposing tough laws can sometimes achieve very negative outcomes.
- Society is based on rules and laws It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted To what extent do you agree or disagree 90
- Instead of asking the government to bear the cost of higher education students should pay their own tuition fees themselves Do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
- Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay any tax to the state To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Surveys conducted in 1982 and 2002 show different pictures of what motivate students to choose a college or university in the UK Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The efficient functioning of society is based on rules and laws Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a timely manner" with adverb for "timely"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ompanies can deliver goods to customers in a timely manner. Businesses can then operate smoothly a...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e people to bear in mind virtues such as honesty, loyalty and integrity in social...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Impose
...tings. Some business laws, for example. impose harsh penalties on some business practi...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...n products or selling counterfeit goods so as to build trust between sellers and consume...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44623655914 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85280287048 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604838709677 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2533104265 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.631578947 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128303421331 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413588344305 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334650001961 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759698413092 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242000035665 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.