The high sale of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and do not real need of a society in which goods are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In industrial countries as well in some less developed one, new consumer goods are emerging at an alarming rate to meet the diversified needs of people from all walk of life. And it seems that this trend of consumerism is fuelled by widespread advertising in modern societies. In my opinion, both factors are critical in soaring the sales of consumer goods.
On the one hand, with the fast pace of modernization, people's physical and spiritual needs are greatly diversified and are carefully categorized which can be witnessed by mushrooming of supermarkets, department stores, and shopping malls. From kitchenware to gardening implements, office consumables to household confections, those places exist to offer a splendid array of modern commodities, catering to every particular taste of humans. No wonder many housewives are so thrilled at the thought of next shopping spree! Moreover, many businesses have sprouted up in recent years. For example, the pedicure industry is thriving as an effective channel to relieve stress and strains of modern life.
On the other hand, the mighty power of advertising is also a contributing factor. It causes people to buy unnecessary items. For Example, manufacturers are step-by-step commercializing commodities by inviting celebrities to promote their brands. Moreover, people are bombarded with so many adverts and broadcasting propaganda. Commercials on television or colorful images on brochures stimulate purchasing impulse in the audience - their potential consumers - although those irons are irrelevant to their products. For instance, car manufacturers and real estate businesses are criticized for using shapely models in their advertisements, the climbing sale of cars and properties give evidence to their great success, at least in commercial terms.
In conclusion, in the analysis of excessive consumption of consumer goods, it is obvious that people's real need and magnetism of advertising are the two most powerful forces at work. In fact, it is often difficult to distinguish between them because a really fascinating advertisement can actually create new needs in viewers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, really, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61419753086 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21759840813 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635802469136 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4867714252 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.266666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126992011917 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387170853288 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385182257374 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827704210411 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420031936184 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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