Some are of the opinion that people are naturally born as good leaders while others feel that leadership skills can be learned.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people think that leadership qualities are something you are born with. However, I personally believe that this is something one can learn throughout his journey of self-grow, by constantly facing new challenges and learning from past mistakes.
Many people showed signs of nature born leader skills since they were young, for instance they enjoyed participating in group activities at school and be the guider, making sure that everyone in the group has their own role to play. The sense of responsibilities is also something that leaders have, the leaders give the teammates motivation and push the team through hardships to reach their goal. Apart from that, leaders seem to have distinct personalities, since leaders are mostly extroverts, with outgoing personality to easily approach others and an optimist attitude when facing any situation.
Though it is true that leading other people are easier to some than others, however, being a good leader with effective human management skills is a different thing. In order to corporate teammates actions and create a harmonized working environment, leaders need to understand their teams and what suits them the best, which is can only be done with time and a lot of observations. Additionally, not all leaders are extroverts with friendly personality or born with perfect leading skills. However, people are brilliant at adapting to the environment. It might be hard and unfamiliar at first but with a lot of effort and practices, they learn beneficial knowledge that can be very helpful later on.
Inconclusion, I think that while leader can be born naturally, a good leader surely takes practices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, apart from, for instance, i think, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3320754717 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86326334222 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3294206707 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.454545455 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277883982949 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105731206849 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585470724218 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174866583626 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427753006959 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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