The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the effects of agricultural land degradation in different parts of the world.
Overall, it can be seen that the main cause for the reduction of farming areas all over the world was over-gazing and Europe suffered the most among regions.
The pie chart gave off three main causes for the decrease of agricultural land. Over-gazing was the biggest reason for this trend, giving that 35% of the globe’s farming surface was damaged because of it. The second-biggest cause of land reduction was deforestation, which took a proportion of 30%. Another reason leading to this condition was over-cultivation, devastating a large amount of farming area.
As mentioned, Europe witnessed a loss of 23% from their farming area, mostly from deforestation. In addition, only 5% of the cultivating area in North America was damage; over a half of which was because of over cultivation. Contrasting to the amount of land that was degraded by over-exploiting in other regions, the Oceania-South Pacific islands saw no damage made by this tendency; however, they were badly affected by over-gazing.
- Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems Some people say they should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- More and more couples are deciding to be child free to have no children in other words Some people claim that those couples reach this conclusion through entirely selfish reasons While others think that they came to this decision through noble motives suc 78
- Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory To what extent do you agree 56
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports while others think people should have the freedom to do any sports or activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26553672316 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18045476944 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621468926554 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9066429567 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119430266903 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690598874624 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082685908761 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920395938294 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472778997774 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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