Some argue that music can help bring people of different cultures and ages together.
Some argue that music can help bring people of different cultures and ages together.In my opinion,i totally agree with this view.
First, Music is something people of all ages or cultures can easily come together, remove all geographical and age. Music, as it touches our hearts and resonates in our minds, does not require interpretation to be enjoyed and understood. Music is very diverse, people who enjoy music can completely choose the genres of music they like. And of course, music doesn't have any age restrictions, so music can bring people with age differences together. and sometimes, music is something that people who are a little bit angry can understand each other better, because sometimes music may not need to be understood, but sometimes, music touches each of our hearts, Because music is born to heal each person's soul.Second, although music does little to break down generational barriers, it does assist cultures in connecting through universal, human perspectives. Even if people do not understand another culture, they can understand the music's messages. music is not understood by everyone because each country they will have their own language and the same music what makes us touched here are melodies melodies sad and happy. Maybe we no longer understand But we can all feel it when we hear the melody.
In conclusion, while music may do more to divide the young and old, it does use its universality to bring different cultures together. With all of my view,i totally agree with this opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, while, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0796812749 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70694776993 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.404965855 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.909090909 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435849198095 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184699086121 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157389794002 0.0667982634062 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335857771656 0.151304729494 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170005565265 0.056905535591 299% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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