Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their stress and anxiety. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some debate that music is a remarkable tool helping people to protect their overwhelmed and agitation. I, personally, state the same perspective of this issue which will be deliberated more below.
On the one side, music protects feeling of anxiety, but with various genres of music which is easy listening, mostly people most likely follow the rhythm and lyrics and thus hampering their cognitive development. Published by journal of scholarship of teaching and learning performance stated, primarily students, their concentration in reading would be broken while listening hip hop and EDM music. Furthermore, the excessive noise level of music could disturb inhabitants’ piece including the quality of sleeping productive ages both students and workers. In order that ones have strength to run on the next activity, local official is better off imposing the noise ordinance laws - San Clemente, California which regulates noise nuisance permit ranging from 07.00am to 10.00pm under any circumstances.
On the flip side, this could stabilise individuals’ mood which afflict the symptoms of depressions. It appears that 85% women witness postpartum disorder (baby blues) occurred by traumatic event after giving birth and the lack of husband’s support cited by JPPBR. Therefore, combination of jazz and classic music is used to be a therapy which has positive sides to reduce their symptom. In addition, being able to foster the strength of body undergoes longer workout with preference of music beats each individual. Unconsciously, ones emit much energy as the beats can stimulate the part of brain to control the body movements in order to be more efficient.
In conclusion, in my standpoint, to drown a sense of stressful and worry through music are more beneficial to be concerned to some respect. This includes normalising their bed-tempered as well as strengthening thought to be workout many hours. This is as long as people become conscious to obey the noise ordinance laws.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39743589744 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9427018758 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657051282051 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7167430546 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11814551697 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419862847712 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414498446118 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744595604962 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00642040711067 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.