Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large
outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Human diseases related to sedentary lifestyles are rising. Therefore, to address the problem, some people suggest that the government should implement policies to increase public open spaces to encourage people to become more involved in physical activities. I totally agree with this idea, and I will explain the reason in the following paragraph.
First, due to the global urbanisation trend, towns and cities are becoming densely populated urban areas. As a result, the demand for accommodation is growing, leading to the decline of open public places. In addition, people’s activities are often associated with sitting still, ranging from working at their desk to playing computer games or mobile phones all day. Consequently, we are suffering from health problems such as gaining weight or even obesity. Secondly, spending a lot of time indoors may lead to mental diseases such as autism or depression. According to medical experts, these issues can be alleviated by doing exercises in fresh air, such as walking or running in parks. Especially if we do this with our friends, the outcome will be more efficient. Besides, participating in activities in outdoor spaces will improve people’s health and prevent diseases.
Admittedly, utilising spaces for housing is important owing to the accommodation deficit, which is increasing. In particular, in developing countries such as Vietnam, Laos, and Cambodia, this is becoming more and more serious. However, human health is a vital factor; thus, it is worth heavily investing in it.
To summarise, without good physical and mental health, we cannot make property for ourselves and contribute to building an affluent country. Hence, investing in public spaces is an investment in our future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...spaces is an investment in our future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, in addition, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45220588235 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87103636434 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650735294118 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8863668752 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186791874705 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529236404116 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493615865564 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107640204287 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260951938218 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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