The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People argue that education should be highlighted for children while others said it is also necessary for illiterate adults as well. As for me, I believe children should be given more priority due to their further dedication.
First of all, adults might have lived a longer life and acquired more knowledge, skills than children but children can devote further to the country. Because children are born late, they are able to learn and comprehend recent knowledge and information. While the old people’s health becomes worse and it is time for them to retire, the youngsters can be a more substantial, energetic workforce. Therefore, there will not be a concern about lack of personnel, the country will continue to develop stably without the involvement of old generations. Furthermore, due to evolution, young people can adapt the old knowledge, skills to a more modern one.
More importantly, proper education for children can decrease juvenile delinquency in the future. Children come to school at a young age with an empty mind to be educated so the educational environment can influence their notions and actions intensely. If they are taught in a bad environment, improper attitudes and actions are easily created and it will drive them to do illegal things. The crime rates can increase which create a hazardous and threatening habitat to all residents and perhaps the visitor. Furthermore, the tourist industry becomes unsteady which means less visitors lead to decrease in the country’s economy.
In general, even though education is necessary for both youngsters and adults. However, investing in children can help the government be beneficial in finance, reputation and workforce.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun visitors is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as for, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33457249071 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9050706717 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6462017488 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167146029281 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603666089201 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418127794599 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106147459437 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142469253091 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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