Some believe that robots play a crucial role in shaping humanity's future, whereas others argue that they pose risks and could harm society. Consider both arguments and present your viewpoint. Explain your viewpoint with reasons and include appropriate examples based on your knowledge or experiences.
Autonomous vehicles, humanless service in restaurants are just a few examples of what we see today in the world of advanced science and technology. The prevailing belief is that robots are essential in our daily lives, however, there are skeptics who remain wary of potential unknown hazards. Though some concerns are reasonable, their benefits still seem to outweigh the drawbacks.
On one hand, robots are considered to cause mass unemployment in many different fields. Since robotic workers tend to perform tasks with more precision and efficiency, quite a few industries are now undergoing the process of automation. By removing human input, business owners can boost their profits, minimize costs, but at the same time, making many workers redundant. For instance, self-driving cars have shifted from being mere visions of the future to an everyday occurrence. This phenomenon not only cites fear among taxi drivers who are on the verge of losing their jobs, but also from the whole community.
On the other hand, automation brings about various benefits. Without a doubt, robots enhance productivity, efficiency and improve quality of life. A smart assistant, robotic vacuum cleaner for instance, can simplify household chores and free individuals from tedious manual tasks, saving them more time for relaxation and reducing stress. Likewise, the use of artificial intelligence (AI) in education has also liberated professionals from sitting in one place for hours and hours, planning one single lesson. It revolutionizes the education field in the way that it offers teachers more space to be creative and critical. These advancements are a big plus that explain why robots are such a helping hand.
In conclusion, while some concerns about these machines are still valid, I am convinced that the integration of robotic devices will promote our productivity, efficiency and well-being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...onsidered to cause mass unemployment in many different fields. Since robotic workers tend to p...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: VACUUM_CLEANER_HOOVER[1]
Message: This expression is common for American English. Did you mean 'hoover'?
Suggestion: hoover
...ity of life. A smart assistant, robotic vacuum cleaner for instance, can simplify household ch...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...s about these machines are still valid, I am convinced that the integration of ro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44745762712 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86344583219 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684745762712 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4254545263 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0749983600853 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0244279010515 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0186818149883 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.041563576308 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109638245262 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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