Some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy too difficult to learn, so some people argue that those subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Undoubtedly, education plays a significant role in this cut-throat competition world. For this, some pupils finds mathematics and philosophy as a typical subject. So, they assert that it should be choosen by that students who are intersted in it. According to my point of view mathematics should compulsory in school rather than philosophy which I shall highlight in upcoming paragraphs.
At first glance, math is important to study in school by children because we do calculators day and night in various ways. Additionally, in this technical era, every work has been done by technical gadgets in which mathematics is equal to English.
Furthermore, money is the basic part of our life so mathematics skill is required for counting it. Moreover, More employment sources are based upon calculation. For an instance, Banking, Calerical job and in forgein nations more high paid job require analytical thinking, so only those people are acceptable for that job who has good mathematics base.
On the other hand, Pholosophy includes human activities developments, social skills according to the age which a person able to learn from their parents. In addition, this type of subject creates over burden on children's mind, due to this they are not able to concentrate on that subjects in which they success such as English , Science.
In conclusion, I would argue that mathematics is mandatory because every thing is depend upon calculation which a person do day and night but philosophy is optional this subject is based upon daily activities which masses gain from their locality.
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25590551181 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92146071652 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637795275591 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.042173996 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233977785241 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780776200048 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785498054313 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11384847375 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746390432341 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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