Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In this contemporary society, technology such as smartphones is becomingly widespread, especially for children's use. There are some reasons for this trend and I believe this is a negative change.
Today, the easy accessibility to smart devices may lead to more hours spent on smartphones for children. These phones are inexpensive and affordable to everyone even children compared to the past when solely adults and wealthy people could purchase them. Therefore, it is common to understand that youngers possess a smartphone for their personal purposes. In addition, the popularity of the attractive applications on phones such as social media and games can be considered to be a compelling reason why the youth spend more time on phones.
From my perspective, I totally argue that this trend has a detrimental impact on the development of children in both physical and mental aspects. Wasting too much time on modern phones lead children not to have sufficient time for engaging in outdoor activities, sports, and exercises that are crucial for physical strength. Besides, lack of exposure to ordinary life deters them from learning essential skills including communication and making friends. As a consequence, they may be less confident and find it hard when communicating with others.
In conclusion, there are understandable causes that make children prefer smartphones to other activities, I entirely consider this an advantage in the development of children.
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| 2022-07-18 | Tran Bao Long | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44298245614 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10447940848 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640350877193 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1283361405 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.818181818 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244430424488 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929338669669 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080891598486 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163448469001 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737732360597 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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