In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes for this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?
Some metropolitan cities and towns have to bear ill-effects of heavy traffic owing to the increasing population. Factors contributing towards this rise and corrective measures to be taken to solve this will be addressed in this essay.
Firstly, cities and towns offer plethora of opportunities to the society especially in the form of jobs, thus attracting more people from far. Predictably, this rise in population ultimately leads to an increase in number of vehicles on roads. Secondly, standards of living are high in these areas so making every person to have a personal vehicle for comfortable ride. Sometimes, we encounter a single person within a 5-seater vehicle stuck in traffic for hours. Moreover, public transport is mostly jam-packed and inconvenient to use during peak hours. To add on, these transport halt at every stop, delaying the time to reach to destination. Hence, people choose and enjoy travelling by personal vehicles, bringing out more vehicles on roads. Thirdly, rise in number of vehicles is not reflected in number and size of the roads, it is still the same. It is like asking a grocer to pour 2 kilogram of rice in 1 kilogram bag. Finally, trade in cities and towns are generally high thus, a large number of heavy vehicles can be encountered on these roads making the condition of traffic more worse. Even though entry of heavy vehicles is restricted at particular hours of the day still it is not efficient to solve the problem.
A saying goes “Every lock is made with key” So the issues if addressed efficiently, negative impact of these can be reduced on public. To begin, companies and colleges can provide free transport facilities, thereby reducing the number of cars and bikes on roads. Another aspect that needs government involvement is widening of roads and building flyovers and dedicating each lane for specific types of vehicles, like for example on lane for two-wheeler and other for four-wheeler. Thirdly technology can be utilised, a case in point, one country is planning to introduce buses that run on thin tracks and these buses can be elevated over other vehicles and move unhindered by traffic jams.
To summarise, although, towns and cities are facing traffic problems, it can be avoided with synthesis of technology, government’s investment and contribution from public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 892, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilogram' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilograms'.
Suggestion: kilograms
...e. It is like asking a grocer to pour 2 kilogram of rice in 1 kilogram bag. Finally, tra...
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Line 5, column 988, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ties and towns are generally high thus, a large number of heavy vehicles can be encountered on th...
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Line 5, column 1087, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...e roads making the condition of traffic more worse. Even though entry of heavy vehicles is...
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Line 5, column 1099, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng the condition of traffic more worse. Even though entry of heavy vehicles is restricted a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1780104712 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89846379129 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55497382199 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7736264128 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.888888889 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245291586593 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657575546085 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638000484804 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163144039431 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697104326493 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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