Some cities have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buildings. People think that they are free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In today’s world of the construction boom, many buildings are encouraged to be built to improve the living quality of people and bring a bright face to the city. Many people argue that they have the right to choose the design and construct their houses freely. While there are some benefits that this trend can bring, I truly believe that its advantages are out shadowed by its disadvantages.
On the one hand, I concur that there are some merits when the government lets people freely build their houses. Firstly, it is true that homeowners and investors are those who fully understand their financial status and the purposes of the building so that they can design and construct it in the most appropriate and reasonable way. For example, a man who possesses a small plot of land may want to build on it a house with multiple floors in order to widen the living space. Secondly, the differences of buildings in a region can bring unique beauty to the area, and in some particular contexts, it can attract visitors and thus, boost the local tourism industry.
On the other hand, I am more convinced that this flexible control can provide individuals and society with tremendous negative effects. Firstly, I believe, in terms of design and construction, people usually cannot see the differences between a suitable building and a unique place to live. Therefore, they may neglect some safe standard in design and that may cause critical accidents for not only workers but also for people living under that roof later. Secondly, these buildings or houses may invade the spaces for some important public constructions such as roads, hospitals, airports, or even military bases. This will not only lead to unwanted destruction but also ruin the city overview.
In conclusion, although some benefits can be brought from this trend I truly believe that without sufficient guidance from authorities and experts, this freedom can certainly do harm to the city
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9877675841 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6368908283 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565749235474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.8719424333 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244808881195 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883098244122 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732717434724 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144573277115 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600314716058 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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