In many cities, cars increasing gradually despite of bicycles. Nonetheless, in some cities, number of cars reducing and bicycles rising. There are server reasons behind this trend. I will discuss both perspectives and give my opinion.
On the one hand, many individuals prefer to use motor vehicles such as cars because they find it is more convenient for them. In order to, go to long journeys, reached fast and make journey comfortable they can use it. Along with this, people who are disabled sick and handicapped can not ride bikes. For instance, a survey conducted by Chandigarh university introduced that every year 60% aged people left bicycles and move to cars.
On the other hand, there are many cities where the number of bikes increasing and cars decreasing. The main reason behind this is growing population and global warming. Private cars emmits carbon dioxide which caused the climate change. To mitigate this issue authorities imposing car taxes, due to it, people are going to use bicycles because they cannot afford too many taxes. Moreover, traffic congestion is also biggest concerns and because of this traffic jams people are moving towards bicycles as they can ride on their narrow places and it does not cover too much area rather than cars which require lots of area.
In my opinion, bicycles are more beneficial for masses because it is environment friendly cheaper and its maintenance free is also less than cars. Besides, natural resources will also save. To illustrate, in Europe majority of individuals have been started using bikes because to keep fit health and preserving natural habitat.
In conclusion, although bikes are not convenient for everyone, there are ample of advantages of bikes. Therefore, in numerous cities people using this and in future this will be definitely climb.
- Government spends much money on education More money should be spent on free time activities To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
- some people thing that the government should establish free libraries in each town other believe that it is the waste of money since people can access the internet at home to obtain information Discuss both view and give your own opinion 82
- In some cities the government has tired to reduced traffic for instance they impose a congestion tax during rush hours Do you think this development is positive and negative 61
- In some cities people are choosing cars instead of bicycles while in other cities riding bikes are replacing cars Why is this the case Which development do you think is better 96
- The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ause they cannot afford too many taxes. Moreover traffic congestion is also biggest conc...
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Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'also the biggest'.
Suggestion: also the biggest
...y taxes. Moreover traffic congestion is also biggest concerns and because of this traffic ja...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...sses because it is environment friendly more cheaper and its maintenance free is also less t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15436241611 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53365260498 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5055552307 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247648399754 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744788632132 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629467189762 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131485980213 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744707686187 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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