It is believed by many that authorities ought to be constructed traditional libraries without any cost, in every city centre. Others however think that this money could be used in other sectors because by internet people can acquire knowledge. I will discuss both arguments and give my own opinion.
There are numerous reasons that why people considered internet is better to learning articles ,books PDFs and so. To begin with, the internet provides 24 hours of day and seventh days of week faculty and any place faculty as well. Along with this, individuals can read and learn anything on only one device such as magazines, newspapers, current affairs and historical e-books. It also save their time and money they don't need to go out.
On the other hand, those who think that traditional libraries have to be built give their opinion as follows. Firstly, it gives a real and pleasant environment as well as they can learn easily through real books because there is a librarian, who could help these readers. Secondly, every library has ample of amenities like computer and internet this type of gadgets sometimes not available at people's house.
In my opinion, libraries are better option for masses as they provides a realistic experience to visitors. However, internet can just show visuals besides on-screen effects eyes, brain and can lead some disease. Apart from this, the internet not compatible for aged people because they do not know how to operate equipments.
In conclusion, although internet has advantages, I believe that traditional libraries should be made because of its has no any drawbacks to readers and it is also a free service.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... internet is better to learning articles ,books PDFs and so. To begin with, the in...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
...affairs and historical e-books. It also save their time and money they dont need to ...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... It also save their time and money they dont need to go out. On the other hand, t...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...es are better option for masses as they provides a realistic experience to visitors. How...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...aries should be made because of its has no any drawbacks to readers and it is also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0802919708 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60254550655 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.350440807 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259593121211 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855381535389 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053621275126 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142380707309 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565594850173 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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