In some cities, there are few controls on the design and construction of homes and other buildings, and owners can decide on the style of their houses. Do the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks?
Nowadays, unimposing regulation related to the building design and construction instead of giving freedom to the owners to decide the house style is the policy of several urban area. I consent to be more disadvantageous sides for this interesting topic which will be elaborated below.
To begin with, in my stand point, giving access to the owners to build their own building freely without regulation might inflict demerits including spoilt the city outlay. The more freedom people to construct building, the more unproper building will exist especially in restricted are. Subsequently, it probably destroys the public facilities such as sanitation and irrigation. Furthermore, deforestation would be the major consequence of this issue where lead to the business purposes. Numerous of modern building including hotel or residence would be constructed inflicting lack of green area surrounding. Not only could increase the number of air pollution, but also would generate unprecedented climate change.
On the flip side, this issue appears to me that it could bring merit such as reducing the budget cost especially for those in the below poverty line. If such regulation is imposed, many people would suffer to build their own home. In terms of the cost, people could not only press the material expense but also reduce the expenditure of architect. In addition, the owner’s desired building concept might be fulfilled by the architect agency might be the another one. The agency could maximize the concept without being restricted by such policy especially related to the forest. To illustrate, hotel which is intended to be natural theme, could be constructed even in the forest which is in some city restricted area.
To sum up, imposing policy that give people freedom to build their own building freely might bring on advantages to some extent. Besides, spoiling the urban area’s outlay and deforestation issue appear to me its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83217194652 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.784950882 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192058225751 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611083401695 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641976612803 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130037545397 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330913206245 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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